”you are the never of my forever, you are my love, my love, my love.”
The English’s translation of Carla Bruni’s song Le toi du moi is You Of Me.
Critique [link] on ~IOwnSarcasm's piece, in the seams. Go check it out.
I feel as if it’s a bit short. Might edit or add it to something bigger later on. What do you think of the length? What do you get from this? General comments please.
EDIT, November 25, '12: Oh my goodness, a DD, what the heck, this was so unexpected. Thank you so so much!! Especially to *Mrs-Freestar-Bul and `thorns!